From d4117859d61ed9560d0d6ab468735a22bfa6d076 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Eelco Dolstra <e.dolstra@tudelft.nl>
Date: Mon, 31 Dec 2007 16:57:12 +0000
Subject:

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 doc/manual/release-notes.xml | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

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diff --git a/doc/manual/release-notes.xml b/doc/manual/release-notes.xml
index f1aa959b1402..656a28fcaa23 100644
--- a/doc/manual/release-notes.xml
+++ b/doc/manual/release-notes.xml
@@ -11,10 +11,11 @@
 <section xml:id="ssec-relnotes-0.11"><title>Release 0.11 (December 31,
 2007)</title>
 
-<para>The most important improvement in Nix 0.11 is secure multi-user
-support.  It also features many usability improvements and language
-extensions, many of them to support NixOS.  Here is an (incomplete)
-list:</para>
+<para>Nix 0.11 has many improvements over the previous stable release.
+The most important improvement is secure multi-user support.  It also
+features many usability enhancements and language extensions, many of
+them prompted by NixOS, the purely functional Linux distribution based
+on Nix.  Here is an (incomplete) list:</para>
 
 
 <itemizedlist>
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