From ad97d1a78653373fad8dc3ed98c3607862581b76 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Fiano Date: Thu, 1 Mar 2018 00:27:25 -0500 Subject: nix-channel grammar and punctuation Minor changes to the nix-channel manpage for my first contribution --- doc/manual/command-ref/nix-channel.xml | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/manual/command-ref/nix-channel.xml b/doc/manual/command-ref/nix-channel.xml index 9acf44e52984..ff4021a765e0 100644 --- a/doc/manual/command-ref/nix-channel.xml +++ b/doc/manual/command-ref/nix-channel.xml @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Description -A Nix channel is mechanism that allows you to automatically stay +A Nix channel is a mechanism that allows you to automatically stay up-to-date with a set of pre-built Nix expressions. A Nix channel is just a URL that points to a place containing both a set of Nix expressions and a pointer to a binary cache. nixexprs.tar.xz A tarball containing Nix expressions and files - referenced by them (such as build scripts and patches). At - top-level, the tarball should contain a single directory. That + referenced by them (such as build scripts and patches). At the + top level, the tarball should contain a single directory. That directory must contain a file default.nix that serves as the channel’s “entry point”. @@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ following files: binary-cache-url A file containing the URL to a binary cache (such - as https://cache.nixos.org. Nix will automatically + as https://cache.nixos.org). Nix will automatically check this cache for pre-built binaries, if the user has sufficient rights to add binary caches. For instance, in a multi-user Nix setup, the binary caches provided by the channels -- cgit 1.4.1